Comments on: The Fortune-Telling Doll http://www.100.chaobell.net/main boys and ghouls Tue, 20 Jul 2010 23:20:15 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9 hourly 1 By: wendy http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4&cpage=1#comment-6083 wendy Mon, 25 Jan 2010 01:03:30 +0000 http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4#comment-6083 So this is really good. I kind of love Ray even though he is a penis because you fleshed him out so nicely. Jeff's voice- your way of having him tell the story is fantastic. He sounds real and interesting and like someone the reader could want to be friends with. Going on to read the next chapter right away. So this is really good. I kind of love Ray even though he is a penis because you fleshed him out so nicely. Jeff’s voice- your way of having him tell the story is fantastic. He sounds real and interesting and like someone the reader could want to be friends with.

Going on to read the next chapter right away.

]]> By: Ishanatur http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4&cpage=1#comment-3894 Ishanatur Mon, 14 Sep 2009 19:30:54 +0000 http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4#comment-3894 Ohhh MY LORD!!! That was ABSO-POSI-FUCKING-TI-VO-LUTELY , laugh so hard i need surgery as well as mind meltingly hot! Where have you been all my life? Ohhh MY LORD!!! That was ABSO-POSI-FUCKING-TI-VO-LUTELY , laugh so hard i need surgery as well as mind meltingly hot!
Where have you been all my life?

]]> By: Lisa http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4&cpage=1#comment-3798 Lisa Fri, 28 Aug 2009 14:54:56 +0000 http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4#comment-3798 Hehe, I loved the story! A little bit rambley at times where I had to scan over but the story arc was interesting and engaging - and that made me read to the end ;) Thank you for sharing this with us, and If you don't mind my saying so ;) why not add this at the end: " “Well then,” he said, and pulled me back down onto the bed, "Screw ME instead" Lisa Hehe, I loved the story!
A little bit rambley at times where I had to scan over but the story arc was interesting and engaging – and that made me read to the end ;)

Thank you for sharing this with us, and If you don’t mind my saying so ;) why not add this at the end:

” “Well then,” he said, and pulled me back down onto the bed, “Screw ME instead”

Lisa

]]> By: Merrilee http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4&cpage=1#comment-3779 Merrilee Mon, 24 Aug 2009 13:06:31 +0000 http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4#comment-3779 Nice one :) Nice one :)

]]> By: Sandra Fowke http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4&cpage=1#comment-3141 Sandra Fowke Sun, 26 Apr 2009 23:59:05 +0000 http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4#comment-3141 Incredible!! This was a great read - well written, those two are so fun together and the story was one to remember. And the sex! Don't get me started on the totally hot sex, those two had chemistry and a half. I will definately check back for more in future :) Incredible!! This was a great read – well written, those two are so fun together and the story was one to remember. And the sex! Don’t get me started on the totally hot sex, those two had chemistry and a half.

I will definately check back for more in future :)

]]> By: Pedes http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4&cpage=1#comment-1072 Pedes Mon, 09 Feb 2009 17:03:59 +0000 http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4#comment-1072 Now I must admit this is a piece of really good writing. Seeing that there are more stories here I guess I won't be bored for quite a while :) Now I must admit this is a piece of really good writing. Seeing that there are more stories here I guess I won’t be bored for quite a while :)

]]> By: Bluhevn http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4&cpage=1#comment-685 Bluhevn Fri, 09 Jan 2009 16:27:44 +0000 http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4#comment-685 Amazing!!! I love horror stories and you just served up a perfect mix of humor, romance and terror. This is my new fave! XDD Amazing!!! I love horror stories and you just served up a perfect mix of humor, romance and terror. This is my new fave! XDD

]]> By: Pigs?? http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4&cpage=1#comment-667 Pigs?? Sun, 04 Jan 2009 20:06:31 +0000 http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4#comment-667 <3 This is amazing. Kenny and Jeff are both totally lovable--now on to read everything else. :) <3 This is amazing. Kenny and Jeff are both totally lovable–now on to read everything else. :)

]]> By: Rewanth http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4&cpage=1#comment-625 Rewanth Tue, 16 Dec 2008 22:03:43 +0000 http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4#comment-625 Well Bloody hell. Now that's really something over-rated... Its so good.. Keep on rollin. Well Bloody hell. Now that’s really something over-rated… Its so good.. Keep on rollin.

]]> By: Hachi http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4&cpage=1#comment-614 Hachi Mon, 08 Dec 2008 06:44:47 +0000 http://www.100.chaobell.net/main/?page_id=4#comment-614 Holy. Shit. That was 1. incredibly epic, 2. terrifyingly hot, and 3. definitely addictive. Don't need a fortune-telling doll to foresee that. Your writing is beautiful and awesome and clean but has tons of voice, and I'm SO glad that after scrolling through approximately 70 Web Fiction Guide reviews, yours was the one I picked to read. That reviewer did me a favor, and I can see why. Please keep writing forever! I will so be checking out the rest of this! Holy. Shit.
That was 1. incredibly epic, 2. terrifyingly hot, and 3. definitely addictive. Don’t need a fortune-telling doll to foresee that. Your writing is beautiful and awesome and clean but has tons of voice, and I’m SO glad that after scrolling through approximately 70 Web Fiction Guide reviews, yours was the one I picked to read. That reviewer did me a favor, and I can see why. Please keep writing forever! I will so be checking out the rest of this!

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